Students are working on crafting Super Sentences containing dialogue. To pass, they need to have all the usual conventions (periods, capitals, correct spelling), as well as properly located quotation marks. Click on “replies” to see the sentences created by the students.
”If i am a pig and I could fly I would hit Suzy” said cole.
“All my veggies are in the middle of a fist fight,” said Tatem while she was dreaming.
“Broke my leg yesterday in football,” said Nevaeh
“yesterday I was driving past the football field and Josh got hit in the face with the football ! ” said Nevaeh
“I was doing research on bear attacks and I saw talking veggies getting attacked by a bear”, said Kim
“A few days ago I saw Mr. Lewis trying to catch a football and he sucked at it,” said Brady.
“One day when I was camping a bear attacked me like a wild cat,” said Emma while she was eating a hot dog.
”Today during fitness run I saw a pig flying , ”said Ethan .
“Why aren’t you helping us get away from this beast!” exclaimed Brady and Julia in union as a black bear was trying to gobble them up.
”I love to play with jacob,” jimmy said
“I trucked someone and broke my leg today,”said Josh.
”Last Saturday I saw Brady getting attacked by a bear who was barfing talking veggies all over Brady,” Maya said.
“Today I saw on the weekly news a bear attack happen, the victim was name Mr. Carrot and Mrs. Apple” said Jason.
”I saw talking veggies playing football,” said Jason.
“I love playing football i’m a world star international super star,i’m the best.” Said Julia
“Get me out of here,” screamed Brady the talking veggie in the frying pan.
“Last Saturday I saw a pug playing football when a bear was attacking the players,” Kelsey said.
“I just got attacked by a bear,” said Ethan.
”Yesterday I was fighting with my veggies because I would not eat them ,” said Kelsey when her veggie was hitting her.
“I found a ball and a bat and I played with it,”said Mason
”One day Rubie was playing futbol she feel on her face ,”
“I saw a bear that was playing futbol he scored two messi scored five the bear attacked messi bob said now the bear won wins
”Yesterday I went to the store and there were talking veggies every where,” said Kim.
When I was eating lunch yesterday my veggies were talking to me”, said jaime
”One day Rubie was playing futbol and she feel on her face,”.
”Yesterday Gage was playing football at crater and a bear came running in and attacked the whole football team but then the team scared the bear off,” said Jimmy
” The other day Cole was playing football and all of a sudden there was a bear coming out of know where with a talking vegetable riding it, saying hurry up you fatty, ” Said Jonathan.
“I have lots of computers don’t touch them or I will crack your heads
,” said l ___
“Oh my gosh I see a talking veggie its so gross,” said Abby.s
One time me and my dad and mom we seen 3 bears this year at prospect and my mom tryed to get a chance to kill it and also this is true.
test
You forgot your end mark Ethan!
Ethan you don’t have a end mark.
cole put a perod.
Maya yours is really funny and I dont see any mistakes.
Cole you need a period in your sentence. Other than that it looks fine.
alexis good job on your test.
Maya great job i like that you made it funny
Comments on Jed.
1.) It should say my dad,my mom and i
2.) it should say we saw
3.) Tryed is spelt tried
jimmy:i know what you wanted to say Leo,you told me. by the way I like your sentence.
abby long put a . after the s not before
comment on Cole your sentience is a run on.
Derek you don’t have a end mark.
jed perod. but good sentence.
Kelsey you forgot to put your tongue in.
Neveah you forgot to capitalize y in yesterday
Diamari Chavez: Your sentence does not make since that much, and at the end you forgot your end mark.
Jonathan curwoods dose’t make scents
Ethan good job on your test.
Kim yours does not need a space before the comma, but besides that it is really funny.