The students were asked to write a “perfect paragraph” in which they were “sucked into their favorite video game.” Students crafted a hand-written rough draft, a hand-written edited-draft, and what appears here, a typed final draft. Click “Replies” to see their work.
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Animal Crossing New Horizons
By: Kadence Nicols
I was just playing Animal Crossing, chopping some trees, collecting wood. Then all of a sudden wasps burst every- where! They were all around, chasing me. I ran up to the campsite and tried to get in the tent, but my villager Pinky was in my way. I finally ran to Nooks Cranny but they were closed. So, I decided to just let the wasps sting me. I ended up back home, with my face all swollen up.
I Got Sucked Into Cookie Run Kingdom
When I first got sucked in I was in the battle fighting cake monsters.
Next I got to the end then there was a boss battle of the evil cookie.
Secondly I got Gingerbrave as my first character and I played my second match with him. After that I got to draw a character or soul stone since i got three hundred diamonds. I hit the button and I got.. Onion Cookie! Finally I played my last match it was super fun and I got a three star. Next thing you know I was back in my gaming chair playing Cookie Run Kingdom.
Crazy Day
Jaylee Harlacher
I heard my best friend cry for help when I got sucked into Minecraft. First, I needed to go hop on my brown horse to get there faster. I looked in the stall and she was missing so I followed the trail of apples. Secondly, I found my horse and rode on. I had to save a stranded villager on the way. Lastly, I stopped at the market and bought marshmallows. The marshmallows were alive and looked like a marshmallow ghost from Ghostbusters. I finally found my friend and completed my video game level.
Ultimate Chicken Horse
Today I was playing Ultimate Chicken Horse with my sister and we started the game. I was trying to go on a thing of hay and I missed. Next I get to pick out something to place on the screen, but I picked some hay. We kept playing, and at the end I won.
Inside My Video Game
On Saturday I was playing on my Retro System and I got sucked into Super Mario Bros 3. I had to dodge fire balls from the fire flower. The flower was merciless. I had to jump on walking mushrooms. They only stopped to turn around. I had to beat Bowser at his castle. Bowser was really trying to kill me. When I woke up I had pizza in my couch and I was really sweaty.
Inside my video game
It was a Friday night.I was playing Subway surfs and then I got sucked in. The police was chasing me it said I have to RUN. There were trains everywhere. I had to get one thousand coins to leave the game.The coins were bright yellow and shiny.I had to go through jumps,runs,tucks,and more. The jumps were hard. Finally I was at 999 coins. I got one more coin. I woke up.
The Glitching Phone
Last week I was playing Roblox and my phone started to glitch. After I was done playing ,I went to play a different game. Before I knew it I was in Roblox! I started to panic and thought, ‘’did I get sucked into Roblox?’’ All I wanted to do was play a different game. I could see all of my games in Roblox, it was like they were gonna fall and kill me! Then I woke up and realized it was all a dream.
In side my video game
By Daisy Moreno
I was playing Crossy Road but my animal kept. Changing so I
Got sucked in the game. When I started to play I was the plane chicken. Uh! I do not like the chicken; it is slow and it makes me die.
I kept playing. I was at fifty eight steps,and then the animal changed!
Eh! Don’t really care if it changed again into the witch. I changed it to
Another animal . It happened again.
Inside My Video Game
On Monday, my friend came over and we played some video games. First, we both got hungry, so we got some chips from the pantry. Then, when we got back… there was like this portal thing. Secondly, we’re kinda dumb, so we went into the portal. After that, we teleported to Fornite. Then we were in a match with a bunch of players. Lastly, we were being hit by these two players, so we both started to hit them back. We got them. Finally, before we knew it, we won the game and teleported back to my house… or did we … ?
If I was Sucked in Minecraft
By Charlotte K.
On Friday I was playing Minecraft and somehow I sucked into the game. I was standing in a field of grass in the middle of nowhere. There were some flowers, trees, sheep, cows, and chickens. I went to go punch a tree to get some wood. When I punched the tree my hand hurt a lot. So I gave up on the tree, and went to get some mutton. When I captured the sheep it ended up getting away and kicking me in the face. When I came out of the video game my hand and face really hurt and I was kinda hungry.
Inside Fortnite
by: Jeremiah
I was playing my Xbox one when all the sudden I got sucked into the game Fortnite. First I landed at loot lake. When I landed at loot lake I got guns. Next I got guns and saw someone and killed them. every time I killed someone I danced. Last about 15 minutes later it was just me and one other person. Then I got the last kill and won the game then I woke up and it was just a dream.
Call of Duty
Ashton Hollon.
2/17/2022
One day I was on my couch playing Call of Duty and eating pizza. Then I got up to get some water and when I got back there was a portal. It sucked me in and before I knew it I was in Call of Duty: Zombies I was with other people and we got loaded into a match. When we got loaded in there were zombies just like what I was playing on my couch. Zombies were popping out of the ground crazy fast and I was running for my life. They chased me down. We beat all of them then
They were all gone and then the boss came. We defeated the boss and I was back on the couch eating pizza.
Inside My Video Game
Cuphead
By: Brayden Petersen
2/17/22
On Monday I was playing on my switch and I got sucked into Cuphead. I was ok with this but now I had to win a boss fight to get out, even though I’m pretty bad at those. Now I went to a boss fight and entered. The boss fight name was Cagney Carnation. Lastly, I started to fight the guy. Guess what? I beat the flower. Now I need to go talk to my manager to get out. Now I’m home safe and sound.
Inside My Video Game
By Van C.
2-17-22
On a Sunday I was playing my Nintendo Switch and somehow I got sucked into the Cuphead video game. I was shooting lazers out of my fingers, and I had a mug on my head! I turned out to be Mugman. I had a blue nose and blue shorts. Then, I met up with Cagney Carnation. I started blasting him with my finger guns. I saw his hands open up and they had boomerangs in them! I jumped over the boomerangs. I shot him a few more times and I got a knockout!
Stuck in Subway Surfers
Suddenly I got caught spray painting the trains and then out of nowhere a guard started chasing me.I was running as fast as I could,then I had to run up a ramp so I can get on the trains.Then, I suddenly found a jet pack and put it on,and I flew higher and higher,landing safely on the trains.Finley,I made a sharp turn sliding my knees toward home and then I lost the gourd luckily.Successfully I made it home and I will never do that again.
By:Carsyn Kirkman
Inside Minecraft
On Saturday I was playing on my PS3 and I pressed a button that looked new and I got sucked into Minecraft. First I went into my mushroom house and was very sad because I didn’t put ladders in it. At the top of the mushroom was my bedroom and a fireplace in the stem and at the bottom was my tunnel room. I left to go to the village and hopefully get poisonous potatoes. Just in case someone tries to steal my potatoes, they’ll get poisoned. Unfortunately it all was just a dream… Or was it?
Inside My Video Game
I was playing minecraft when I got sucked in.I woke up in the game and I looked different . I had short blue hair with red horns, a red shirt and black pants. Then I found a village. When I got their I grew some crops and picked them but a veliger took some.Then I got chased by a zombie.I ran into a house and went to bed. When I woke up I realized it was a dream.
In my video game
On Sunday I was zapped into minecraft. The grass was all blocks. Every thing was blocks. The animals were blocks. I saw a cow. I did something that a noob would do I dug straight down. I died in lava.
By Mason ward
Steven.n
2\17\2022
Fortnite
There was one hundred going in the game.we got into the game.now there was 98 players in the game.we had to get loot you get loot by opening chest then I won.
Inside super smash Brothers
One day I was playing super smash brothers all by myself and then the game sucked me in ! After the game sucked me in ,the game said that I was going to have to fight to get out.I was fighting king k.rule,and I was Mario .At the start I had no idea what to do ,and I was taking a lot of damage.After a while I started to get serious,so I did some of the combos.I jumped and spiked him,and when he tried to get me back got him instead. He got me with his cannon five times ,and then he tried to get me the sixth time I flipped it back. That was the last hit ! Then it went all black .
When I woke up I was on my couch with the switch on my lap but I realized it was a dream!
The Island
By:Cyrus H.
One day I was playing my game Ark and I got sucked into it. I looked at my arm and it was the specimen implant then it started to glow. I saw a forest in the distance so I walked in it and I saw a T-rex eating a Raptor. I walked backwards and I was out of the forest I got some wood and stone then I made a picaxe then I broke a big rock and I got some flint
I got some fiber, then I made an axe. I made a little hut and slept then I woke up and killed a dodo then I got some hide and made some armor with it then I got tranquilizer
darts so I went back into the forest and I found a raptor so I knocked it out and tamed it.
Then I made a saddle and started to ride it. Then I got an idea. I found the T-rex. I shot it with my crossbow and it got knocked out then I tamed it then I made the saddle then I whistled to my raptor to follow me. Then I made a house then I got some sleep.
The next morning I went to the caves and I found the artifacts so first I fought the Megapithecus then I fought the Broodmother then I fought the Dragon.Then i found the volcano I used the artifacts and the heads of the bosses the door opened I made my way through and there it was. The final boss I killed it and it was over. Then a crack opened in the ground. It was a new place.
The skatepark about a girl crying BY Carter C.
g. I tried to get over to see what 2/17/22
One time i went to the skatepark and I saw a girl crying wong, but I Thought The hill was to big for me. I went for it anyways because nothing can scare me. When I got over there I asked her if she was ok. When she said she was ok I gave her a bandage and she said thank you. When she got up I took her to her dad and then I left. When I was done with that I went to my friends. When I was leaving her dad came up to me and said thank you for helping.